May 11, 2026
This feels like a bad dnd session where everyone including the DM is severely autistic.
- The mc is the angsty male tsundere whose backstory is 11/10 edgy. Forr some reason he hates goddesses, and refuses to "trust them again" when his backstory is he had to kill his goddess and trusted partner to prevent them from being corrupted. so extreme misplaced anger here. The angsty boy MC will then constantly yell at everyone, especially at his actual allies, and especially the ones that are actually helpful for no reason other than the fact that he finds them annoying.
-On the DMs side every single
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non party character (or NPCs), including the bumfuck yokels in the goddamn fantasy apocalypse can easily make the perception check to instantly identify that the MC is a penal criminal. Upon making said perception check they suffer a -10 wisdom penalty to making rational decisions, such as "fuck, that's a demon lord, and we're about to be routed, lets not die. the MC is making the basic common sense suggestion, but since it comes from a criminal we do the opposite"
- bumfuck yokels who choose to stay in the village about to be tainted by the blight instead of evacuating - are capable of identifying the mc is a penal criminal, and simultaneously show disgust that he's here, but also blames them for not being there faster.
The party members:
1 - constantly angry mc because angsty backstory means treating genuinely helpful allies like shit is fine
1 - insufferable loli (the DMs favorite but also their only purpose is supplying the MC with plot armor and to be the narrative piece)
1 - crazy feral person who never talks
1 - kleptomaniac who is actually really helpful but always ditches the party
1 - actually good RP from a flamboyant "strategist" who everyone hates and ignores.
1 - the insane crafter with delusions of grandeur who contributes literally nothing besides being better than entire workshops of dudes at enchanting gear. (he is also good at RP and is thus carrying the interest of the story so far)
And unfortunately, during combat, talking is a free action so the annoying loli doing annoying moralizing and the MC responding to her annoying moralizing result in all the combat being frozen in time until they're done with their milquetoast conversation
Reviewer’s Rating: 5
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